Part 3

Band 5+: What kinds of computer games do people in your country play?

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Community games have positive as well as negative impacts on people's lives. In my country, younger children, specifically those aged 6 to 10, are addicted to playing mobile games like PUBG, Free Fire, and Mobile Legends. Besides that, adults like me work hard to secure their future. It's beneficial for children to limit their time while playing so that it can help them develop their future even better.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Community games have positive as well as negative impacts in people’s lives. So in my country, the younger children, like the age, the children above like the age 6 to 10 are addicted in playing mobile games like PUBG, Free Fire, Mobile Legends. Besides that, adults like me, they really work hard to secure their future. So it’s beneficial for the children to limit time while playing so that it can help them to develop their future even more better.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 3

games: 2

children: 2

playing: 2

mobile: 2

future: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it mainly focuses on the impact of games rather than the types of games played. It mentions a few specific games but doesn't provide a broader overview of popular games in the country. Try to directly address the question by listing various game types and their popularity. Consider expanding on the types of games played by different age groups or demographics.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some hesitations and repetitions ("like the age"). Improving the flow and reducing filler words would enhance coherence. Focus on speaking more smoothly and naturally.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the speaker uses relevant terms like "addicted" and "beneficial," more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. Try to incorporate more descriptive language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "addicted in playing" and "even more better." The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Work on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence construction for a higher score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct use of adverbs.

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