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Band 6+: What kinds of people have lost of great ideas in your country

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In my country, different people have great ideas in their minds. First of all, those who belong to the technology department and entrepreneurship, as well as bankers. The people who work in these fields adopt good and well-established ideas because they meet different types of people daily. They have a great social circle, and because of this vast range, they get different opinions and ideas from various people on a daily basis. That's why they generate good ideas compared to others. So, in my country, the technology department, entrepreneurship, and bankers have good ideas.

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In my country different people have great ideas in their minds. First of all those people who belong to technological department and entrepreneurship especially as well as bankers. The people who work in these fields adopt good ideas and well established ideas because on daily basis they met different types of people and they have a great social circle and they met different people because of this vast range of social circle they get different opinions and ideas from different people on daily basis so that’s why they get good ideas as compared to other people. So in my country technology department, entrepreneurship, bankers have good ideas.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

ideas: 5

people: 4

they: 4

different: 3

have: 3

good: 3

country: 2

great: 2

technology: 2

department: 2

entrepreneurship: 2

bankers: 2

because: 2

daily: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response is well-organized and coherent, and the ideas are relevant to the question. However, the answer focuses more on who has good ideas rather than who has lost great ideas, as the question asks. Consider directly addressing the prompt's specific request in future responses. Broadening the scope of examples and providing more detailed explanations would further enhance the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight repetition towards the end, summarizing what was already stated. Improving the flow by using more sophisticated linking words (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'Moreover') would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'adopt' and 'vast range' show good lexical range. However, more precise vocabulary could be used. For example, instead of 'good ideas,' consider using terms like 'innovative solutions' or 'groundbreaking concepts'. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. For instance, the phrasing 'they met different types of people' should be 'they meet different types of people.' Using more complex grammatical structures (e.g., passive voice, relative clauses) would improve the score.

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