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Band 6+: What kinds of promises do people often make?

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People often make different types of promises, depending on the situation. For example, students might promise their parents that they will achieve good grades, which has a positive value in their relationship. People often promise to support and help others. At what level does a promise meet the line to complete the task? Presently, I think promises are a way to build trust, but keeping them is sometimes difficult, especially when an unexpected problem arises. Still, making a promise shows commitment and emotional thought in any relationship.

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People often make different types of promises, depending on the situation. For example, students might promise their parents that their students have a positive value placed in their relationship. People often promise to spot and show it to others. At what level is the promise to meet the line to complete the task? Presently, I think promises are a way to build trust, but keeping them is sometimes difficult, especially when an expensive problem comes up. Still making a promise, so commitment and thought emotion in any relationship.

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people: 2

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated or precise. Words like "spot" and "show it to others" are not quite the right fit in the context. Try to use more precise and nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. Consider synonyms for 'promise' to show range.

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There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "their students have a positive value placed in their relationship" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The sentence "Still making a promise, so commitment and thought emotion in any relationship" is also grammatically flawed and lacks clarity. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

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