Band 7+: What kinds of things do people in your country often buy from online shops?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant and well-organized. Consider adding more detail or examples to further illustrate the popularity of online shopping in Vietnam. For instance, you could mention specific online platforms or types of food and skincare products that are commonly purchased.

The answer is well-organized and coherent. The slight repetition of 'in actuality' could be omitted for improved fluency. The ideas flow logically.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. The phrase 'haul items from the shop' is slightly unclear; consider replacing it with a more precise term like 'import goods' or 'purchase imported goods' for greater clarity and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the response.

The grammar is mostly accurate with only a minor issue ('in actuality'). The sentence structures are varied and appropriate. Minor improvements in word choice would elevate the grammatical range.