Band 6+: What makes people happy in their everyday lives?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer stays on topic and provides a relevant response, but it relies heavily on personal experience rather than generalizing about what makes people happy. To improve, consider discussing common factors such as social connections, meaningful work, or simple pleasures, and avoid using personal examples as the main focus. Additionally, expanding the answer with more depth and variety would strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and organized, with a clear introduction, example, and conclusion. However, there is some repetition ('little routine or little things') and a slight lack of development. To improve, expand on the idea with more specific examples or a broader perspective, and avoid repeating the same phrase.

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly precise or varied. Words like 'things', 'routines', 'pleasure emotions' are simple. To improve, use more specific and varied vocabulary such as 'simple pleasures', 'daily rituals', 'a sense of contentment', or 'emotional well-being'.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are minor errors: 'makes' should be 'make' (subject-verb agreement), 'listen music' should be 'listen to music', and 'feel pleasure emotions' is awkward. The sentence structures are simple. To improve, use a wider range of structures, such as conditional sentences or complex clauses, and ensure subject-verb agreement.