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Band 6+: What measures should be taken to ensure that technological advancements benefit all members of society, not just a select few?

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First of all, scientific achievements should be announced to society so we can know about them and incorporate the new methods or approaches into our daily lives. I think we should, first of all, announce advancements so the whole society can benefit from them.

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First of all scientific achievements should be announced to the society so we can know about it and you insert the new method or approach to our daily lives daily lives so yeah I think we should first of all announce advancements so the whole society can benefit from it

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and development. It primarily focuses on announcing advancements, which is a limited perspective. To improve, consider discussing a broader range of measures, such as equitable access to technology, education, and addressing potential ethical concerns.

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The answer is somewhat coherent, but there's some repetition ('daily lives daily lives') and a lack of sophisticated cohesive devices. To improve, try to vary your sentence structure and use a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'first of all,' you could use phrases like 'initially,' 'to begin with,' or 'primarily.'

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and flexibility. The language used is quite basic. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to scientific advancements and societal benefits. For example, instead of 'announce,' you could use 'disseminate,' 'publicize,' or 'communicate.' Also, try to use synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition.

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