Part 3

Band 6+: What needs to be improved in public transport? Will there be fewer people using cars because of improved public transportation? Will there be fewer cars if public transport is free? Should governments encourage people to use public transportation? What's the most popular means of transportation in your country? What are the advantages and disadvantages of private transport? Who likes to travel more, older people or younger people?

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First, it's Wi-Fi and chargers. Most people need Wi-Fi, and it's a comfortable feature for public transport, which many people use. The second is shade. Public transport must provide shade. The third is security. Many people lose their belongings in public transport, and with a lot of people around, there's a chance for theft. It's important for public transport to increase security, as it's a convenient way for the public. Thank you.

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First, it’s Wi-Fi and charger. The most people is needed to Wi-Fi and it’s a most comfortable way for public transport and many people use from public transport. And the second is Shade-O. The public transport must be with Shade-O. The third is security. The most population is lost their things in public transport and it has a lot of people. It’s a chance to robbies to rob their things and it’s a public transport to increase their security and it’s a most convenient way for public. Thank you.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

public: 5

it's: 4

people: 4

transport: 4

wi-fi: 2

shade: 2

security: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response is relevant to the prompt and addresses some aspects of public transport improvement. However, it focuses narrowly on a limited number of issues and doesn't fully explore the broader questions about car usage, government policy, or generational travel preferences. Consider expanding your answers to address all parts of the question and provide more comprehensive and detailed responses.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, addressing the prompt's focus on public transport improvements. However, the fluency could be improved by using smoother transitions between ideas and avoiding repetition (e.g., 'most people'). More sophisticated linking words would enhance the flow. The structure is simple but effective in presenting three key areas for improvement.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks range and precision. Words like 'Shade-O' are unclear and should be replaced with 'shade' or 'air conditioning'. While the core message is understandable, more sophisticated vocabulary would elevate the response. The student uses simple vocabulary effectively, but more precise and varied word choices would improve the score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains some errors, particularly in sentence structure and article usage. For example, 'The most people is needed to Wi-Fi' is grammatically incorrect. While the overall message is clear, improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly enhance the score. The student attempts complex sentences but needs to refine their grammatical accuracy.

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