Band 7+: What part of your day do you like best

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question. Consider adding more detail or examples to further illustrate your enjoyment of the nighttime activities. Expanding on the types of games, the nature of the parties, or specific details about the restaurants and meals would enrich the response.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition ('during the night') could be avoided. The structure is good, with a clear contrast between the main point and a secondary point. Improving the flow by using more sophisticated linking words would enhance the fluency.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "entertain" and "supper" show a good range. However, more precise vocabulary could be used. For example, instead of 'hand out', 'spend time with' or 'socialize with' would be more natural. Using synonyms for 'night' would also improve lexical range.

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. 'I mainly entertained' should be 'I mainly do things to entertain myself' or 'I mainly engage in entertainment'. 'have a break' is grammatically correct but less formal than 'take a break'. Using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice or more complex sentence structures, would improve the score.