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Band 6+: What role should education play in preparing young people for the future workforce?

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Different kinds of rules prepare young people for future workplaces because of education, just like discipline and punctuality. Most young people have the discipline for their work and also have a passion for their jobs, so they may be successful in their future careers. For example, someone wanting to be in the Air Force needs to be more disciplined in their work and practice computer skills. Otherwise, they may also be interested in the Air Force. Someone who wants to be a soldier must have the discipline to manage the daily tasks of that job and also have a love for their country. If someone shares the same feelings for their country, they may become a soldier, and we can refer to them as a Bari as well.

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Different kind of rules making young people for future workplaces because of education just like the discipline and the punctuation. Most of young people have the discipline for their work and also have the affection for the work work so they may be successful in their future and his work just like somebody is wanting to be an Air Force so he may need to be more disciplined to be more disciplined in his working and his practicing and computer skills otherwise they may also trying to be interested in the Air Force somebody wants to be a soldier so he has the discipline to take care of the daily basis of how that work will be done and also being a love for the country and somebody has the same feelings for the country so he may be himself a soldier and we can call him a Bari as well.

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