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Band 7+: What role should governments play in promoting healthy lifestyles among their citizens?

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In my opinion, governments can encourage citizens to adopt healthier lifestyles by providing more public spaces in the city. By creating public places such as parks, sports stadiums, and others, people can engage in healthy activities like exercising with their friends or families in public spaces, such as jogging, morning walks, and just strolling around the park. In Jakarta, public spaces are becoming more popular in society because the government has created many public spaces within the city. It can be seen every weekend, as people spend their time with their families or friends, jogging or walking together. I think it's a positive development in urban areas.

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In my opinion, governments can encourage citizens to uphold their lifestyle by providing more public spaces in the city. By providing public places such as parks, sports stadium and others, people can be more engaged with healthy lifestyles like doing exercises together with their friends or their families in public spaces like jogging, morning walking and just strolling around the park. And a work sample in Jakarta, public spaces are becoming more popular in society because the government has provided many public spaces within the city. And it can be seen in every weekends, every people spend their time with their family or their friends to just getting a jogging or morning walking together. And I think it’s such a positive development in urban.

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spaces: 4

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people: 2

friends: 2

families: 2

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The response addresses the question directly and provides a relevant example. To improve, consider expanding on the range of governmental actions beyond just providing public spaces. Discussing other strategies like educational campaigns, subsidies for healthy food, or regulations on unhealthy products could strengthen the answer.

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The answer is generally coherent, but there are some instances of repetition ('public spaces') that could be phrased differently to improve flow. The structure is logical, presenting an opinion and supporting it with an example. To enhance coherence, consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'public spaces,' use synonyms or rephrase the concept.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for discussing the topic, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. While the words used are appropriate, the answer could benefit from more sophisticated vocabulary related to public health, urban planning, or community engagement. For example, instead of 'doing exercises,' you could use 'engaging in physical activity' or 'participating in recreational activities.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors that affect the overall impression. For example, 'uphold their lifestyle' could be more accurately phrased as 'adopt healthier lifestyles.' Also, 'a work sample in Jakarta' should be 'a working example in Jakarta' or 'for example, in Jakarta'. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring consistent accuracy in verb tenses and article usage.

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