Band 6+: What role should international collaborations play in addressing global health crises?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response touches on the importance of international cooperation but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, elaborate on the mechanisms for collaboration and provide concrete suggestions for enhancing their effectiveness. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('a global issue, a global health issue'). The connection between ideas could be smoother. Try to use more varied cohesive devices to link your ideas together more effectively. For example, you could use phrases like 'Furthermore,' 'In addition to,' or 'Consequently' to build a stronger argument.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The phrase 'co-operation with this kind of problems to solve' is a bit awkward. Aim to use more precise and sophisticated vocabulary related to international collaboration and global health. For example, instead of 'co-operation,' you could use 'collaboration,' 'partnerships,' or 'multilateral efforts.'

The grammar is generally accurate, but there are some minor errors and awkward phrasing ('they have a lot of people'). Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more clearly and accurately. For example, you could use conditional sentences ('If countries collaborated more closely...') or complex sentences with relative clauses ('...which would allow for a more coordinated response').