Band 6+: What role should international collaborations play in addressing global health crises?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the question but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, elaborate on the types of collaborations and how they lead to increased funding and crisis resolution. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is generally coherent, but could benefit from more varied cohesive devices. The repetition of 'more and more' is noticeable. Try to use a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, you could use 'furthermore,' 'in addition,' or 'consequently' to enhance the flow of your answer.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The phrase 'increase more money' is not idiomatic. Use 'increases funding' instead. Expand your vocabulary related to global health and international collaboration to provide more nuanced responses. For example, use terms like 'resource allocation,' 'knowledge sharing,' or 'capacity building.'

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there's a minor error ('They can help them'). Aim for more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider grammatical range. For instance, you could use conditional sentences or relative clauses to express more complex ideas.