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Band 6+: What rules do people need to follow in public places?

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There are some kinds of rules that people should avoid breaking in public places. For example, if you are going somewhere by public transport like a bus, you should wear headphones while talking, shouting on the phone, or listening to loud music because it can easily disturb the tranquility of others. For that reason, they may dislike you. So, these rules should be followed by everyone in public places.

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There are some kinds of rules which people should avoid doing them in a public place. For example, if you are going to somewhere by public transport like bus, you should wear headphones while talking, shouting on the phone or listening to blasting music because they can easily break the tranquility of others. For that reason they really dislike you. So these rules should be followed by everyone in a public place.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

should: 3

public: 3

rules: 2

places: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a specific example of appropriate behavior on public transport. However, it would benefit from expanding on other rules and providing a broader range of examples to demonstrate a fuller understanding of the topic. Consider discussing rules related to littering, respecting personal space, and adhering to posted signage.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and slightly awkward phrasing ('some kinds of rules which people should avoid doing them') detract from fluency. Consider rephrasing to improve flow and conciseness.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "tranquility" show a good range, but some word choices could be more precise. For example, "disturb" would be a more natural choice than "break the tranquility of." Consider expanding vocabulary with synonyms for common words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors. The sentence 'if you are going to somewhere by public transport like bus' is grammatically incorrect. The use of 'they really dislike you' is slightly informal. Work on improving grammatical accuracy and using more sophisticated sentence structures.

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