Band 5+: What sort of jobs do people do in your home town?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a main idea. However, the answer could benefit from more detail and a more natural flow. Consider expanding on the types of farming, the economic aspects, and perhaps mentioning other occupations besides farming, even if they are less prevalent.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some pauses and unclear phrasing. The structure could be improved by using more sophisticated linking words and a clearer sentence structure. For example, instead of 'They will continue to rise,' a more precise description of the farming process or their work routine would be beneficial. Try to speak more smoothly and connect your ideas more logically.

The vocabulary is basic and limited. While the core message is conveyed, more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. Instead of 'buy to earn money,' a more natural expression like 'sell their produce to earn a living' would be better. Consider using more descriptive words to paint a clearer picture of the jobs and lifestyle in your hometown.

There are grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and word order. The phrase 'They will continue to rise' is unclear. The sentence 'They will continue to rise and after this they can buy to earn money or bring them house and eat' is grammatically incorrect and difficult to understand. Focus on improving sentence structure and using correct word order. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as relative clauses and passive voice, to enhance your score.