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Band 5+: What was your dream job when you were young?

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Well, when I was a child, I wanted to be a lawyer because I wanted a serious and responsible job for the future.

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Well, when I was a child I want to be lower because being in serious and responsible job for future

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The response is relevant to the question and provides a simple answer. To improve, consider elaborating on why you wanted to be a lawyer, perhaps by describing specific aspects of the job that appealed to you or any experiences that influenced your choice. Adding more detail would make the response more engaging and demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary and grammatical structures.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the phrasing is awkward. The connection between wanting to be a lawyer and wanting a serious and responsible job isn't clearly articulated. Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions and more natural sentence structures. Consider adding a brief explanation of *why* a lawyer was the desired profession.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic. While understandable, more precise and sophisticated language would improve the score. The word "lower" is misused and needs replacement with a suitable profession. Using more descriptive words to explain the appeal of the job would enhance lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are grammatical errors, particularly in the tense and word choice. The sentence structure is simple. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly improve the score. The use of past simple tense is inconsistent.

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