Band 7+: What would you like to change about job

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The student directly addresses the question and provides a clear answer. They identify a specific aspect of their job they would like to change, which is the writing of reports. However, the answer lacks a bit of depth. It would be beneficial to elaborate on why writing reports is stressful and how using computers could alleviate that stress. For example, they could mention specific challenges they face with report writing and how computers could help with organization, formatting, or research.

The student speaks with good fluency and coherence. The answer is well-organized and easy to follow. There is a slight hesitation in the middle of the answer, but it doesn't significantly impact the overall flow. The use of cohesive devices like "but overall" helps to connect the different parts of the answer.

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including words like "stressful", "recommend", and "overall". However, there is room for improvement in terms of using more specific and sophisticated vocabulary. For example, instead of "stressful", they could use a more nuanced word like "demanding" or "time-consuming". They could also use more specific vocabulary related to report writing, such as "data analysis" or "presentation".

The student demonstrates good grammatical accuracy, but there is one minor error. They use the incorrect tense "will change" instead of "would change". This suggests a lack of attention to detail in grammar. The student also uses a slightly awkward phrase "over overall", which could be replaced with "overall" for better clarity.