Band 6+: Which kind of holidays accomodation do you like to stay in ?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant and coherent. Consider expanding on the advantages of renting a flat beyond privacy, perhaps mentioning cost-effectiveness, flexibility, or the ability to cook your own meals. Adding a specific example of a positive experience in a rented accommodation would further enhance the response.

The answer is understandable, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ("I'm not I'm not"). Smoother delivery and more concise phrasing would improve fluency. The structure is coherent, though.

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "tidy" in this context are a bit informal. More precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. The phrase "something similar" is a good improvement over the original.

There are several grammatical errors in the raw answer ("this thing is could be," "I'm not have to be"). While the refined answer is better, it still has room for improvement. More complex grammatical structures and error-free sentences are needed for a higher score.