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Band 5+: Who would like to take photos more often, young people or older people?

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Nowadays, young people like to take photos very often because of the modern world. Some old people don't know about photography. There are many kinds of courses in photography in my country, but mostly young boys like to take photography courses or graphic design, and they have some techniques in photography. So young people like to take photos.

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Nowadays, young people like to take photos very often because good modern world. So some old people don’t know about the photograph. There are many kind of courses in photography in my country but mostly young boys like to take photograph course or graphic design and they have got some techniques in photograph. So young people like to take photos.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

photography: 4

young: 3

people: 3

like: 3

take: 3

photos: 2

courses: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer stays on topic and addresses the question, but it could be more fully developed. It provides a general comparison, though it leans slightly towards personal experience. To improve, consider discussing broader societal trends or reasons beyond personal observation, and ensure a balanced comparison between young and older people.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent but lacks clear organization and cohesive devices. There is some repetition and the ideas are not fully developed. To improve, use linking words like 'for example', 'in contrast', and structure the answer with a clear comparison between young and old people.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'take photos' used multiple times). There is some attempt at topic-specific words like 'photography courses' and 'graphic design', but overall range is limited. To improve, use synonyms like 'capture images', 'photography enthusiasts', and more precise terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly simple with some errors (e.g., 'because good modern world' missing 'of the'). Sentence structures are basic and lack variety. To improve, use complex sentences with subordinate clauses and ensure correct prepositions and articles.

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