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Band 6+: Why do people often want more money, no matter how much they have got?

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Well, to be honest, people are never satisfied with what they have. They want more money as they grow older. They want more investment and they want to save for the future of their young ones. They don't want to be...

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Well to be honest people are never satisfied with what they have. They want more money as with growing age. They want more investment and they want to save the future of their young ones. They don’t want to be…

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 6

want: 4

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and development. Consider exploring the underlying psychological and societal factors driving the desire for more money, rather than focusing solely on personal motivations. Expanding on the reasons and providing more specific examples would improve the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is a slight stumble in the middle, and the answer feels a bit abrupt. Adding a concluding sentence would improve fluency and coherence. Consider pausing slightly more between ideas for better pacing.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "investment" are used correctly, but more precise and nuanced vocabulary could be employed to express the complexities of financial motivations. Consider using synonyms for 'money' to show range.

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Grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor issues. The sentence 'They want more money as with growing age' is grammatically incorrect and needs restructuring. While the answer demonstrates some grammatical range, using more complex sentence structures would enhance the score.

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