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Band 5+: Why do people want to do family business?

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From my perspective, I think people enjoy doing family business because it improves the relationship between relatives. Malva, it's in hand just and loaded with potential. Furthermore, they can make structural changes and bring growth to their companies.

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From my perspective, I think people enjoy doing family buildings because it improves the relationship between relatives, Malva, its in hand just and loaded teeth. For the more they can make structurally and bring growth waste to their companies,

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks depth and comprehensive explanation. Consider expanding on the reasons why family businesses improve relationships and how structural changes lead to growth. Providing specific examples would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some unclear phrases, such as "Malva, it's in hand just and loaded with potential." The structure could be improved by using clearer transitions between ideas. Focus on speaking in complete sentences and using more sophisticated linking words to improve coherence.

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The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "structural changes" and "growth" are good, but more precise and nuanced vocabulary would elevate the response. Try using synonyms and more descriptive language to show a wider range of vocabulary.

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There are grammatical errors, particularly in the phrase "Malva, it's in hand just and loaded with potential." The sentence structure is also somewhat simplistic. Work on improving sentence complexity and accuracy to achieve a higher score. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and complex sentences.

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