Band 6+: Why do some people like to buy expensive goods?

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

The answer is quite brief and could be more developed by providing more reasons and elaborating on each reason. Consider exploring the concepts of status symbols, investment value, and emotional connection to luxury goods. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is coherent, but the phrasing 'Will others purchase them because the quality is good?' sounds more like a question than a statement. A more fluent response would connect the two reasons more smoothly, perhaps using a conjunction like 'while' or 'whereas'.

The vocabulary is adequate, but could be more precise. Instead of 'show off,' a more sophisticated word like 'demonstrate status' or 'flaunt their wealth' could be used. Similarly, 'good quality' could be replaced with a more nuanced term like 'superior craftsmanship' or 'durability'.

The grammar is mostly correct, but the question at the end is grammatically incorrect and disrupts the flow. The student should focus on constructing complete and grammatically sound sentences.