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Band 6+: why do some people like to play computer games in their spare time

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Well, in this case, I will definitely choose that most people nowadays like to play online games specifically to count down for a second or for a few hours so they can keep working on the following tasks they need to do. Another reason I think they like to play computer games is that in our society, those people who enjoy playing games want to elevate their intelligence to cope with harder tasks. So I think that's the reason people like to play.

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Well, in this case I will definitely choose because most people nowadays like to play online games specifically for them to count down for a second or for a few hours so that they can keep working the following tasks they need to do. And another reason why I think they like to play computer games is because in our society those people who like to play games is because they want to elevate their intelligence in order to cope with harder tasks or like, you know. So I think that’s why the reason people like to play.

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people: 3

like: 3

play: 3

games: 3

they: 3

tasks: 2

reason: 2

think: 2

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question but lacks depth and detailed explanation. Consider exploring a wider range of reasons why people enjoy computer games, such as social interaction, stress relief, or the challenge and satisfaction derived from gameplay. Try to support your points with more specific examples and avoid generalizations.

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The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There's some repetition and self-correction. Work on smoother transitions between ideas. Practice speaking more naturally and confidently, reducing filler words like 'you know'.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not highly sophisticated. The phrasing 'count down for a second or a few hours' is slightly awkward. Try using more precise and varied vocabulary to express your ideas. For example, instead of 'elevate their intelligence,' consider 'improve their cognitive skills' or 'sharpen their problem-solving abilities'.

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Grammar contains several errors. The sentence structure is often clumsy. Focus on improving sentence structure and grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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