Band 6+: Why do some people not like staying in hotels?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a couple of reasons why people may dislike staying in hotels. To improve, consider expanding on these points with more detail and examples, and explore a wider range of potential reasons beyond privacy and noise.

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There are some hesitations and unnatural phrasing, such as "In my view, I think maybe it'because." The ideas are presented in a logical order, but smoother transitions would enhance coherence. Practice speaking more spontaneously and connecting your ideas with more sophisticated linking words and phrases.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "uncomfortable" and "lack of privacy" are fine, but more precise and nuanced vocabulary would elevate the response. For example, instead of "no atmosphere from the next room," consider using words like "noise" or "disturbances." Instead of "traffic contraction," use "traffic congestion" or "noise from traffic." Expanding vocabulary will improve the score.

There are several grammatical errors. The sentence "In my view, I think maybe it'because" is grammatically incorrect. The phrase "They are not familiar like their home" is also grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be something like "They are not familiar with it, like their home." The sentence "Moreover, no atmosphere from the next room and traffic contraction is the thing that they dislike at hotel" is also grammatically incorrect. Work on sentence structure and accuracy to improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions.