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Band 7+: Why do some people not like staying in hotels?

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Some people find it challenging to stay in hotels because some hotels don't have adequate security systems. For that reason, some customers have issues and lose some of their well-being. Additionally, in some countries, hotels are really expensive, and many tourists find it a waste of money.

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Some people find it challenging staying in hotels because some hotels don’t have enough security system. And for that reason, some customers have a problem and they lose some of their well-being. Also in some countries, hotels are really expensive and also a lot of tourists find it waste of money.

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides valid reasons why some people dislike staying in hotels. To improve, consider expanding on the reasons provided with more detailed explanations and examples. Exploring a wider range of potential issues, such as lack of privacy, impersonal service, or discomfort with unfamiliar environments, would enhance the response.

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The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like 'adequate security systems' and 'well-being' show a good range. However, more precise vocabulary could elevate the response. For example, instead of 'a lot of tourists,' consider 'a significant number of tourists' or 'many tourists'.

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Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. The sentence structure is simple but effective. Using more complex sentence structures, such as subordinate clauses, would improve grammatical range. For example, the sentence 'Also in some countries, hotels are really expensive and also a lot of tourists find it waste of money' could be improved by combining the two clauses more elegantly.

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