Band 7+: Why do some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response directly addresses the question with a clear reason and provides a personal example to support the answer. The language used is natural and the explanation is well-developed.

The response is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and slight awkwardness in phrasing. The flow could be improved with smoother transitions between ideas. For example, avoid starting with 'So one of the reasons for that I believe'. Instead, directly state your belief. Practice speaking more naturally and connecting your ideas more seamlessly.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Using 'cream grandma' is a bit unusual; 'dear grandma' or simply 'grandma' would be more natural. Try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary related to memories, sentimental value, and personal connections. For example, instead of 'reminder,' you could use 'memento' or 'keepsake'.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors. 'French and Glacier has passed away' should be 'She has passed away'. Also, 'this is ever my turn of what she did' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'this is a reminder of what she did'. Focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Review basic grammar rules and practice constructing more complex sentences accurately.