Band 7+: Why do you think people become criminals?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

This is an excellent response that covers multiple perspectives on the complex issue of criminal behavior. Consider exploring the societal factors that contribute to crime in more depth for even greater breadth.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There's a slight stumble with the word "crying" instead of "criminals" and the phrase "dropable abilities" needs correction to "employable abilities." Minor self-correction is present, but overall the flow is good.

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The use of "per-preserve" is incorrect and should be replaced with "peer pressure." More sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the response, but the current selection is sufficient.

There are some grammatical errors. The most significant is the use of "crying" instead of "criminals." The phrase "dropable abilities" is also grammatically incorrect. While the answer demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, the errors prevent a higher score. Focus on accurate word choice and grammar.