Band 5+: Will there be more and more people planting food in the future?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is partially relevant to the question but focuses more on technology's role in food production rather than addressing the core question of whether more people will engage in planting food. Consider directly addressing the question of increased human involvement in planting, exploring factors such as population growth, urbanization, and changing food production methods. A broader perspective encompassing various aspects of food production would improve the response.

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There is some repetition and self-correction. Improving the linking words and sentence structure would enhance fluency and coherence. Consider a more structured approach, perhaps outlining the current situation and then projecting into the future.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "blunting food" are unclear. Using more precise and varied vocabulary related to agriculture and technology would improve this aspect. Consider synonyms for 'cutting-edge devices' and 'grow more food'.

There are grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and tense consistency. The phrase "technology devices that occurs" is grammatically incorrect. Improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.