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Band 5+: Will there be more or less green space in cities in the future?

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I think there will be more urban organizations all around the world. The reason why we can't keep our parks full of trees or green areas is that the construction of factories and buildings, along with the increasing population, will not help maintain these kinds of places. We need more spaces to develop our country with building companies, buildings, and factories.

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Ithnics. There will be more urban organizations all around the world. The reason why we can’t keep our parks full with trees or green areas is that the construction of factories and buildings, along with the increasing number of population, will not help, uh, maintain these kind of places. We need more spaces to develop our country with building companies, buildings, factories.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it lacks a comprehensive discussion of the future of green spaces in cities. Consider exploring both sides of the argument (increase and decrease of green spaces) and providing a balanced perspective with supporting details and examples.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some hesitations and a slight lack of coherence. The initial 'Ithnics' is unclear and detracts from the fluency. Improving the flow of ideas and reducing filler words ('uh') would enhance the score.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. More precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of 'urban organizations,' a more specific term could be used, depending on the intended meaning. The phrase 'these kinds of places' could be replaced with a more descriptive term.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of 'maintain these kind of places.' The sentence structure is also somewhat simple. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would significantly improve the score.

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