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Part 2

Band 6+: .You live near a record shop that sells music, movies, and books. GAME OVER Write a letter to the shop asking if they have a few different items that you are looking for.

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73% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.
Polished transcript:
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Dear Siri, the reason why I'm writing this letter is to check the availability of one of the Harry Potter book series and a few movies in your shop. As a resident of the urban city, Cheddar, nearby your shop, I want to know if you have the item Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. Moreover, in case of non-availability, I was wondering if I could ask you to order it for your shop so that I can purchase it from you. Furthermore, what is your expected delivery time? Do you offer express delivery so that I could get my order in advance? I want to present this to my sister, who is a great admirer of the book and a fan of the movie, for her birthday, which falls on 24 November. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Malika.
Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Dear Siri, the reason why I’m writing this letter is the regard to check the availability of one of the Harry Potter book series and a few movies in your shop. At the matter of fact that I am resident of the urban city, cheddar, nearby your shop, I want to know that if you have this item Harry Potter and the book of the credit, more over in case of non-availability, I was wondering if I can ask you to order them to your shop so that I can purchase them from your shop. Furthermore, what is your expected delivery time? Do you offer express delivery so that I could get my order in advance? As I want to present this to my sister who is a great admissor of the book and I heard fan of the movie on her birthday which falls on 24 November. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest your sensory, Malika.

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Vocabulary Repetition:
your: 5
shop: 3
order: 3
harry: 2
potter: 2
could: 2
delivery: 2
Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

6.5
Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

7
The letter is well-structured and polite. Consider adding specific movie titles to your request for greater clarity. Also, briefly mentioning other items you're interested in beyond Harry Potter would make the letter more comprehensive.

Fluency & Coherence

6
The letter is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There are some unnecessary phrases and repetitions. For example, 'At the matter of fact that I am a resident...' is wordy and could be simplified. The structure is mostly coherent, but some sentences could be better organized for improved flow. Consider using more concise language and stronger transitions between ideas.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary is adequate, but there's room for improvement in precision. Words like "admissor" are misused. The writer uses some slightly informal language ('a great admissor'). A more formal tone would be appropriate for a letter to a business. Expanding vocabulary with more precise synonyms would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect word order, tense inconsistencies, and preposition usage. For example, 'in the regard to' is incorrect. The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Focusing on accurate grammar and sentence construction is crucial. Reviewing grammar rules, particularly regarding prepositions and verb tenses, would be beneficial.

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