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Band 7+: A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campaign in this summer for the first time. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Mark,

I hope this message finds you well! It’s been too long since we last caught up, and I’m excited to hear more about the sales job you’ve been telling me about.

I think a camping holiday at Algonquin National Park would be a fantastic choice for you. It would provide a refreshing escape from your busy schedule, allowing you to unwind and reconnect with nature. The tranquil surroundings and beautiful landscapes would surely rejuvenate your spirit, don’t you agree?

However, it’s important to consider some potential drawbacks. You might encounter a fair number of mosquitoes and other insects, which could be bothersome if you’re not properly prepared. A good insect repellent and mosquito nets would certainly help. Additionally, as someone who prioritizes cleanliness, you might find the unavoidable dirt and rustic living a bit uncomfortable at times.

On that note, I would love to join you on this camping adventure! Since it’s your first time, I can assist with all the preparations and ensure you have everything you need. Plus, it would be a wonderful way for us to reconnect and create some lasting memories together after all this time.

Let me know your thoughts, and I look forward to planning this exciting trip with you. Take care, my friend!

Your best friend,

Big Mike

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

8.5

All parts of the task are successfully addressed. The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The response is thorough and shows a good understanding of the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

8.5

The letter flows smoothly and logically. Paragraphing is excellent, and the ideas are connected effectively. The cohesive devices used are sophisticated and enhance the readability of the letter.

Lexical Resource

7

The vocabulary used is varied and precise. There is evidence of a wide range of vocabulary, although a few more sophisticated words could be used to achieve a band 9.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6

While the grammar is mostly accurate, there are a few minor errors that prevent a higher score. The range of grammatical structures is good, but more complex structures could be used to demonstrate greater control.

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