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Band 5+: Here is a bar chart showing the percentage of people using different modes of transportation in five major cities. Your Task: 1. Analyze the chart. 2. Write an overview (summarizing the main trends). 3. Describe key details and comparisons. Write your response, and I'll provide feedback!

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The image presents a bar chart illustrating the percentage of people using various modes of transportation across five cities: New York, London, Tokyo, Paris, Sydney. In New York, car use is 30%, bus 25%, train 20%, bicycle 15%, walking 10%. For London, car use is 20%, bus 30%, train 25%, bicycle 15%, walking 10%. Tokyo shows car use at 10%, bus 15%, train 50%, bicycle 20%, walking 5%. In Paris, car is used by 25%, bus 20%, train 30%, bicycle 15%, walking 10%. In Sydney, car use is at 35%, bus 20%, train 25%, bicycle 10%, walking 10%.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of population using different modes of transportation in 5 various countries.

Overall,the proportion of people using train in Tokyo showcase the highest rate between other remaining countries. Notably,the rate of car users in Sydney experience largest proportion,while the reverse was true for Tokyo.

Focusing on figures which account for higher rate the train users in Tokyo showcase dominance rate at approximately 50% and the proportion of car users in Sydney is similar. London made up with 30% of car and bus users but the percentage of people who walk and cycle are more lower by 20%. Likewise in New York city there are 5% of nation who prefer to walk whereas 40% of generation in car.

Examining the fugures with lower percentage the proportion of people who are walking is very low in every country at about 5%.In addition the bicycle users made up 10% in all countries despite Tokyo and Paris.

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing an overview and describing key details. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the modes of transport in New York are not accurately represented. To improve, ensure all data is accurately represented and that comparisons are precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is somewhat disjointed. The overview is present but could be more concise and clearly highlight the main trends. The body paragraphs lack clear transitions between ideas, making it harder to follow the comparisons between cities and transportation modes. Consider using more cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link sentences and paragraphs. Improve paragraphing by grouping related ideas together.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are not entirely accurate or natural (e.g., "showcase dominance rate," "made up with"). There's room to enhance the vocabulary by using more precise and varied language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using "percentage," try synonyms like "proportion," "share," or "rate." Focus on using vocabulary that accurately reflects the data and avoids redundancy.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement errors, incorrect article usage, and awkward phrasing are present throughout the text. For example, "the proportion of people using train in Tokyo showcase the highest rate" contains both a subject-verb agreement error and awkward phrasing. To improve, carefully proofread for grammatical errors, paying attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. Practice constructing more complex sentences while ensuring grammatical accuracy.

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Band 5+: Here is a bar chart showing the percentage of people using different modes of transportation in five major cities. Your Task: 1. Analyze the chart. 2. Write an overview (summarizing the main trends). 3. Describe key details and comparisons. Write your response, and I'll provide feedback!

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