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Band 4+: Task 1: The chart below shows the donation given to six different types of charity by one company from 2012 to 2014.

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The image depicts charity donations by one company from 2012 to 2014 across six categories: Social welfare recorded 22 in 2012, 17 in 2013, and 26 in 2014; Education had 5 in 2012, 9 in 2013, and 9 in 2014; Environment saw 7 in 2012, 2 in 2013, and 5 in 2014; Health reported 2 in 2012, 12 in 2013, and 9 in 2014; Wildlife registered 4 in 2012, 4 in 2013, and 3 in 2014; Arts received 3 in 2012, 1 in 2013, and 4 in 2014.

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The presented bar graph outlines the financial participation made by single organization to 6 distinct groups in year 2012, 2013 and 2014.

As it is observed the company spends the highest on societal work and average on literacy, healthcare, surroundings and fauna and the least on artistic things.

The data depicts that in year 2012 the welfare work was supported around 22% whereas next year it decreases to 15% and took a shift in coming year to 24%. On the schooling and environment the corporation pay out 8% in first year adding to this 5 and 4% in 2013 slightly higher in year 2014 6 and 9 % respectively. Furthermore, on wellness the ratio is almost 6, 7,9% in these years. Moreover, on wild animals and fine art they disburse lesser from others which is 3% initially 1% increases to it in animal life other remains the same although in last year it the number added to 4 and 3%.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The organization of information could be improved for better coherence. Consider using more precise language and providing specific data points to support your observations. Also, ensure that all values are accurate and properly compared.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The information is not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons. Consider grouping the charities based on donation patterns (e.g., those with increasing donations, decreasing donations, or fluctuating donations) to improve coherence. Use topic sentences to introduce the main idea of each paragraph.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and sometimes inaccurate ('societal work,' 'literacy' instead of 'education,' 'surroundings' instead of 'environment,' 'fauna' instead of 'wildlife,' 'artistic things'). There is a lack of precision in describing the data. Use more specific and varied vocabulary related to financial trends (e.g., 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'fluctuated,' 'remained stable'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. For example, 'the company spends the highest on societal work' and 'On the schooling and environment the corporation pay out 8% in first year' are grammatically incorrect. Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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