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Band 5+: Task 1: The line graph shows the percentage of money spent on advertising, five types of media (TV, Newspaper, Magazine, Radio, Internet). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows data on advertising spending percentages from 2010 to 2040: in 2010, TV at 40%, Newspapers at 35%, Magazines at 15%, Radio at 7%, Internet at 5%; by 2020, TV peaks at 45%, Newspapers drops to 30%, Magazines at 20%, Radio at 10%, Internet increases to 20%; in 2030, TV at 40%, Newspapers at 20%, Magazines at 10%, Radio at 4%, Internet at 35%; by 2040, TV declines to 30%, Newspapers to 10%, Magazines to 5%, Radio to 3%, while Internet reaches 45%.

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The illustration displays the proportion of money spent on add in five various types of media. There is the timeline on horizontal axis, and the percentage on verticale. Overall, it is noticeable that the amount of advertisments in newspapers, TV, radio, and magazines, witness a decline, whereas the Internet tends to rise.

At the beginning,in 2010 Internet hitted a low of one-seventh. In the next decade it showed a sharp increase and levelled up on 25%. Between 2030-2040 it will rise gradually and reach a peak of approximately 70 percent.

Turning to the decreased medias, three of them follow the similar tendency, and only TV presents the opposite. Magazines and newspapers had started in the middle. Meanwhile, TV was the populariest compared to the others. 2020 witnessed the highest point at 60 percent,however , in the following years TV’s proportion is going to flactuate and decrease sharply.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview of the main trends. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and a lack of specific details. To improve, focus on providing more precise data points and ensuring accuracy. Also, try to include more specific comparisons between the different media types. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, making it difficult for the reader to follow the analysis effortlessly. For example, the shift from the overall trend to the specifics of Internet advertising lacks a clear connection. Consider using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'Furthermore') to link ideas and improve the logical progression of your report. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single, clear aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, which affects the precision and sophistication of the analysis. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'add' instead of 'advertising,' 'witness a decline' which is grammatically awkward). To improve, try to incorporate a wider variety of synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., 'plummet,' 'surge,' 'level off,' 'gradual increase'). Pay attention to the correct usage of prepositions and collocations to enhance clarity.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that impact clarity and readability. These include incorrect verb tenses ('Internet hitted,' 'levelled up on'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('the amount of advertisments,' 'TV was the populariest'). There are also issues with punctuation. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammatical structures and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors in tense, agreement, and word order. Practice using a variety of sentence structures to enhance the complexity and sophistication of your writing.

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