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Band 4+: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts two clustered bar graphs representing the population distribution in cities, towns, and rural areas in Australia for people born in the country and those born outside in the years 1995 and 2010. In 1995, People born in Australia had around 54 in cities, 40 in towns, and 5 in rural areas, while those born outside Australia had approximately 20 in cities, 30 in towns, and 8 in rural areas. In 2010, People born in Australia had 70, over 45, and less than 5 for cities, towns, and rural areas; those born outside Australia had 18, 25, and less than 5, respectively.

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The chart shows the percentage of people born in Australia and outside of Australia in cities, towns and rural areas in the year 1995 and 2010.

In 1995, there were more percentage of people born in the cities in both Australia and outside of Australia. Although there were more people outside of Australia in the cities.In the towns, there were the least percentage of people, however there were less outside of Australia than inside. In the rural areas there were 10% more people born outside Australia than in Australia.

In 2010, the overall percentage of people in cities increased, both in Australia and outside Australia, although there were more people born outside Australia. The percentage of people in both the rural areas and town seems to have decreased throughout the year.However there are more percentage of people in Australia in towns and rural areas.

Overall, in 1995 and 2010, both have more percentage of people born in cities in both Australia and outside Australia.

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australia: 13

people: 10

outside: 8

percentage: 7

there: 7

cities: 4

rural: 4

towns: 3

areas: 3

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The response provides an overview of the main features of the bar chart, but there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The comparison between the years 1995 and 2010 is not clearly presented. The report also lacks specific data from the visual information.

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The report demonstrates some coherence and cohesion, but there are issues with paragraphing and the organization of ideas. The progression of information is not always clear, and there are some repetitive statements.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and imprecise word choices. The report lacks the precise use of vocabulary and does not demonstrate a wide range of lexical resources.

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The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors and inaccuracies. Punctuation is also inconsistent, and there are issues with subject-verb agreement.

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