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Band 5+: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts two clustered bar graphs representing the population distribution in cities, towns, and rural areas in Australia for people born in the country and those born outside in the years 1995 and 2010. In 1995, People born in Australia had around 54 in cities, 40 in towns, and 5 in rural areas, while those born outside Australia had approximately 20 in cities, 30 in towns, and 8 in rural areas. In 2010, People born in Australia had 70, over 45, and less than 5 for cities, towns, and rural areas; those born outside Australia had 18, 25, and less than 5, respectively.

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The given bar chart gives information about the number of people who were born in 3 different places such as cities, towns, and rural areas in Australia from 1995 to 2010.

Overall, the birthrate in cities was higher compared to towns and rural areas in both years while population in towns took the second largest position after the cities.

In 1995 number of people in urban areas who were born in Australia was about 50 % and it increased by about 25% in 2010. Population in towns in 1995 composed exact 20% and in rural areas it was 20 % bigger than towns pupulation.In 2010 the percentage of people in both towns and rural areas constituted same number (about 18%).

According to people who were born i outside of Australia, the proportion of cities reached at peak in 1995 and 2010 (60% and 80%). The figure for villages decreased dramatically from 40% to 5% from 1995 to 2010.The amount of people in towns decreased by about 75 in 2010

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towns: 7

people: 5

areas: 5

about: 4

rural: 4

number: 3

cities: 3

australia: 3

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