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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.

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The image presents a bar chart comparing the percentages of holiday accommodation choices among the British in England, Scotland, Wales, and Northern Ireland for the year 2010, categorized by self-catering, caravan, camping, and hotel. England had 20% self-catering, 10% caravan, 20% camping, and 50% hotel. Scotland had 30% self-catering, 10% caravan, 40% camping, and 20% hotel. Wales had 15% self-catering, 20% caravan, 15% camping, and 50% hotel. Northern Ireland had 10% self-catering, 5% caravan, 10% camping, and 45% hotel.

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the chart illustrates how much the percentage of holiday accommodation was chosen by the residents in England, Scotland,Wales and northern ireland in 2010.

Overall,Hotel was the most popular choice of people in all 4 cities examined.Meanwhile, Camping recieved the least choice from almost citizens in 4 areas given.

the percentage of hotel chosen washighest in all cities given,which had the similar figures was around 50%.In England, people was prefered self-catering than caravan and camping, with being arounf 28%,5% and 12% respectively. In Scotland, The proportion of people choosing self-catering was the same, with about 30%.However the figures for caravan and camping were the opposite of England.

the proportion of people selecting self-catering was roughly 28% in Wales, compared to the lower figures for caravan and camping,with being about 8% and 145 respectively. conversely,people in Northern Ireland were prefered caravan which was at about 31% than self-catering and camping which had the same figure was about 12%

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