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Band 6+: The bar chart below shows the number of miles travelled in a year by a men and woman for six different purposes in a particular country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a horizontal bar chart detailing the number of car trips, in a year, categorized by purpose and gender in Europe: Day trip shows women at approximately 35 and men at slightly under 10; Sports/Entertainment presents women around 50 and men close to 75; Visiting friends indicates women near 155 and men around 100; Shopping reveals women at roughly 125 and men at about 110; Travelling to work lists women slightly above 210 and men at approximately 260.

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The bar compares the number of car trips taken by both genders using cars with five different purposes per day in a European city.

What is most striking when looking at the date is that the number of women is higher than men in shopping and visiting friends. It is important to note that men are superior in using cars for work purposes.

While the number of car trips taken by women for visiting friends and shopping is higher than that of men, at about 210 and 280 people respectively, the figures for men in both purposes have the same number with approximately 190 individuals. In contrast, men show their overwhelm in work with more than 300 persons, the number of women has about 210 people.

Regarding sport or entertainment purposes, the figure for men is about 10 persons more than that of women which is approximately 130 people. Day trips recorded the lowest trips taken by men and women, at about 40 and 35 individuals respectively.

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number: 5

women: 5

trips: 4

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taken: 3

purposes: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and covers the main features, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The data for 'visiting friends' and 'shopping' are not clearly separated, and the figures cited (e.g., 210, 280, 190) do not match the visual description. Additionally, the report omits the 'travelling to work' comparison for women and misstates the day trip figures. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and clearly compare all categories. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'the number of women is higher' and instead specify the purpose and gender clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. For example, 'the number of women is higher than men' could be more precise, and the comparison between purposes is not always logically organized. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure that comparisons are made systematically, perhaps by grouping similar trends together. Also, avoid abrupt shifts between categories.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. Phrases like 'What is most striking' and 'It is important to note' are useful, but there are inaccuracies such as 'men are superior' (should be 'men take more trips') and 'overwhelm' (should be 'dominance'). To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms for 'higher' and 'lower' (e.g., 'exceed', 'outnumber', 'surpass') and ensure word choice is natural and accurate. Avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'the number of women is higher than men' should be 'the number of trips taken by women is higher than that of men', and 'men show their overwhelm' is incorrect. Also, 'at about 210 and 280 people respectively' is confusing because the numbers do not match the visual description. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of comparatives, and ensure that each sentence is grammatically complete and clear. Practice using a range of structures, such as passive voice and relative clauses, with accuracy.

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