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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two graphics: a bar chart showing the number of people in four categories (Drama, Painting, Sculpture, and Language) with men and women represented by different colors, and a pie chart showing the percentage of people in five age groups. In the bar chart, the number of men and women in Drama is equal at 15, in Painting, 10 men and 25 women, in Sculpture 5 men and 10 women, and in Language 40 men and 45 women. In the pie chart, 5% are aged under 20, 11% are 20-29, 16% are 30-39, 26% are 40-49, and 42% are 50 or over.

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It is clear that the highest number of people attended in language course while attended in sculpture course was lowest.It also clear that the highest percentage of people attended at course was 50 or over year old while under 20 year aged people was lowest.

In terms of bar chart, consumer attended on tge language and drama was higher in women than men, at 40,30,20 and 10 people,respectively.Women attended more on the painting than men, at almost 30 and 25, respectively.But consumer attended on the sculpture was higher in men,at 10 than women,at around 5.

According to the pie chart, the highest percentage of people attended these course was 50 or over year at 42%.By contrast the percentage of people attended these course in under the 20 age at 5% was lowest.

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attended: 9

people: 5

course: 5

chart: 4

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