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Band 4+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

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The image displays a bar graph comparing male and female percentages across seven age groups. Vertically, percentages range from 10 to 60, increasing by 10. Horizontally, age groups are labeled '15 to 24', '25 to 34', '35 to 44', '45 to 54', '55 to 64', and '65 and over'. Males: 47.7%, 48.9%, 42.2%, 39.5%, 43.1%, 45.1%, 46.7%. Females: 52.8%, 49.1%, 52.5%, 53.3%, 53%, 47.1% respectively. Male bars are diagonal-striped, female bars are black.

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The chart distinguishes the rate of Australian people by their gender did the physical training on a firmly basis in 2010

Overall, the highest man rate who looked after their body is varied from 35 to 44, while the youngest female involved in physical activities constituted the highest score in 2010

Man inspired by physical activities in the teenage period constituted 47%, while age group from 25 to 34 year old increased on 1,2%. The middle age man constituted the highest percentage of training lovers(53,3%).

However, a teenage group girls faced with the 52,8%, in the same year the sports doers women of the age between 25 and 34 rate decreased on 10,6%. Worthy considering that the two genders’ in their older ages constituted almost the same percentage of physical activities involvers

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