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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of households in four countries (USA, Canada, Germany, and Mexico) with internet access in the years 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image presents a bar chart displaying household internet access percentages for the years 2000 and 2010 across four countries: USA: 2000 at 50%, 2010 at 70%; Canada: 2000 at 60%, 2010 at 80%; Germany: 2000 at 70%, 2010 at 90%; Mexico: 2000 at 30%, 2010 at 40%.

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The bar chart displays the percentage of households with internet access in four diffrent country (USA, Canada, German and Mexico) across two decade 2000 and 2010. The figure counted in percentage.

Overall, Germany households became the highest country with internet access in both years compared to Usa which households were became the lowest among all countries.

On one hand, German households with internet access started at around 80 percent in 2000. And after a decade, the figure jumped into approximately 90 percent at the end of the period. Highest among another three countries. In terms of Canada households, the figure began at under 60% in 2000 then the number increased significantly to around 70 percent in 2010.

On the other hand, Mexico households launched at about 50 percent in the beginning of the period before it reached 70 percent in the final year. Mean while, in Usa households, the number commence at only around 36 percent in 2000 then the figure reached its peak at approximately 50% in the end of the period given.

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households: 7

percent: 6

figure: 4

internet: 3

access: 3

around: 3

period: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the data for Germany in 2000 is reported as 80% when it is 70% in the visual description. Similarly, the data for Mexico, Canada and the USA are also inaccurate. The report also contains some language errors. To improve, ensure that the data reported is accurate and pay attention to grammar and vocabulary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. For instance, the shift from the overall statement to the details of each country could be smoother. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the logical progression of information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies ('diffrent country,' 'German households with internet access started at around 80 percent in 2000'). There is also some awkward phrasing ('the figure jumped into approximately 90 percent'). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons, and pay attention to the accuracy of word choice and collocation.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('households were became the lowest'), subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect preposition usage. Sentence structure is also somewhat basic, limiting the complexity of the analysis. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, practicing sentence construction, and proofreading carefully for errors.

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