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Band 6+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of male and female students studying four different subjects at a university in 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart titled 'Percentage of Students at a University in 2020', showing gender distribution across four faculties. For Business, the student population was 47% Male and 35% Female. In Engineering, it was 49% Male and 25% Female. For Medicine, the percentages were 27% Male and 36% Female. In Arts, the distribution was 17% Male and 29% Female.

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The given bar chart compares the proportion of male and female pupils studying business, engineering, medicine and arts at a university in the year 2020.

Overall, it is apparent that engineering subject had the highest proportion of male students, while medicine had the highest involvement of femal learners.

Analysing in detail, engineering field accounted for the largest number of male students with almost a half of the total engineering students. Business subject involved almost 46% of male students, while femal participation was around 34% which was the second highest subject according to femal involvements.

Medicine had the largest involvement of femal learners with almost 35% and the male was about 28%. In contrast, arts and engineering were the subjects with the lowest active participation of male and female learners at approximately 18% and 24% respectively .

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The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the bar chart and making relevant comparisons. The overall trends are identified, and specific data points are mentioned to support the observations. To improve, ensure that all key features are covered more comprehensively and that the data is presented with greater accuracy. For instance, while the report mentions the highest and lowest participation rates, it could benefit from a more nuanced comparison of the differences between male and female participation across all subjects. Also, pay attention to grammar and word choice to enhance clarity. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report presents a generally clear overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping information more thematically, such as discussing male and female participation separately or comparing subjects directly within the same paragraph. The use of cohesive devices is adequate but could be more varied to enhance the connection between ideas.

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The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there's room for more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'involvement,' consider synonyms like 'participation,' 'representation,' or 'enrollment.' Expanding your range of descriptive adjectives and adverbs would also enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage ('the,' 'a,' 'an'). Review sentence structures to ensure they are grammatically sound and convey the intended meaning accurately. Proofreading carefully before submission can help identify and correct these errors.

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