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Band 5+: The bar chart below shows the percentage of share of total world production by Asia, Europe and other parts of the world from the years 1840 to 2000.

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The image contains a bar graph with data over time: in 1840, Asia 50, Europe 37, Rest of World 8; in 1880, Asia 49, Europe 37, Rest of World 8; in 1920, Asia 25, Europe 35, Rest of World 15; in 1960, Asia 35, Europe 32, Rest of World 18; in 2000, Asia 37, Europe 40, Rest of World 23.

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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of production with share of total world in Asia, Europe and the rest of the world from 1840 to 2000.

Overall, the percentage of Asia showed the largest proportions in the begin and end of the period, while the second most popular was Europe in over four decades. Notably, the rest of the world it always low percentages in during this period.

To begin with, the total world production share had 50% in Asia, at the beginning of the period, whereas it was consistently decresaed those shares the following periods, approximately 20% in 1920. After they a dramatic rose to reached 40% in the final year. In addition, Europe shares the second major popular in 1840, there is rapidly increased 48% and it was continously a decline in over 60-years period.

In contrast, the rest of the world percentage has started at 20% and it showed soared significantly during this period, which is the least percentage compared to other two continents between 1840 and 2000.

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europe: 3

percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The data for Asia is incorrectly described (e.g., 'dramatic rose to reached 40%' instead of 37% in 2000, and the decline to 25% in 1920 is not clearly stated). Europe's trend is misrepresented (it actually fluctuates around 32-40%, not 'rapidly increased 48%' and then 'continously a decline'). The rest of the world is inaccurately stated as starting at 20% (it starts at 8%) and 'soared significantly' (it gradually increases to 23%). The report also lacks specific data for some years and has some grammatical issues. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, use clear and precise language, and provide a more balanced description of all regions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt transitions. For example, 'the second most popular was Europe in over four decades' is vague, and the shift from Asia to Europe in the second paragraph is not smooth. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, such as 'After they a dramatic rose' which confuses the reader. To improve, use clearer topic sentences, ensure pronouns refer clearly to the correct nouns, and employ a wider range of linking words (e.g., 'in contrast', 'meanwhile', 'subsequently') to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There are attempts to use varied language (e.g., 'illustrates', 'proportion', 'soared'), but some word choices are inaccurate or informal (e.g., 'popular' for 'significant', 'decresaed' for 'decreased', 'dramatic rose' instead of 'dramatic rise'). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and formal vocabulary (e.g., 'accounted for', 'experienced a decline', 'witnessed a surge'), and avoid repetition by using synonyms. Also, ensure correct word forms (e.g., 'decline' as a noun vs. 'declined' as a verb).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('it always low percentages'), incorrect verb forms ('decresaed', 'soared' used incorrectly), and missing or misused articles ('the rest of the world it always low percentages'). Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is inconsistent. To improve, focus on constructing grammatically correct sentences, using a variety of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, conditionals), and proofreading for common errors. Practicing with past tense and prepositions would also be beneficial.

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