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Band 7+: The bar chart compares the percentage of households that owned five different electronic appliances in 2010 and 2020.

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The image features a bar chart titled "Household ownership of electronic appliances" with subtitle "Percentage of households, 2010 and 2020", accompanied by a data table. The vertical axis of the bar chart measures percentage from 0% to 100% in increments of 25%, while the horizontal axis lists five appliances, comparing 2010 and 2020: Television, Refrigerator, Washing machine, Microwave, and Dishwasher. The corresponding table lists columns "Appliance", "2010", "2020", and "Increase" with the exact values: Television at 90% (2010), 95% (2020), with a 5 points increase; Refrigerator at 70% (2010), 85% (2020), with a 15 points increase; Washing machine at 60% (2010), 75% (2020), with a 15 points increase; Microwave at 40% (2010), 65% (2020), with a 25 points increase; and Dishwasher at 15% (2010), 30% (2020), with a 15 points increase.

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The bar chart shows the percentages of households that owned five different electronic appliances, namely televisions, refrigerators, washing machines, microwaves and dishwashers in 2010 and 2020.

Overall, households ownership rates of all five electronic appliances were higher in 2020 than 2010. Televisions were the highest owned electronic appliance in both 2010 and 2020. Refrigerators, washing machines, and microwaves holds the next three positions, respectively. Dishwashers had the lowest ownership rates in both 2010 and 2020.

Televisions ownership rates increased by 5 percentage points from 90% in 2010 to 95% in 2020. The ownership rates of both refrigerators and washing machines increased from 70% to 85% and 60% to 75%, respectively. Microwave experienced the highest change of ownership rates rising by 25 percentage points from 40% in 2010 to 65% in 2020. Dishwashers were the least owned electronic appliance accounted for 15% and 30% ownership rates in 2010 and 2020, respectively.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

ownership: 6

rates: 6

electronic: 4

owned: 3

refrigerators: 3

washing: 3

machines: 3

dishwashers: 3

respectively: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing a clear overview and accurate data for all appliances. It is well-organized with a logical structure, and the key trends are highlighted. Minor grammatical issues (e.g., 'households ownership' should be 'household ownership', 'Microwave experienced' should be 'Microwaves experienced') and slight awkward phrasing do not detract from the overall clarity. To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement and use more precise language (e.g., 'the ownership rate of microwaves').

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized with a clear overall structure: introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The information is presented logically, and the use of cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'respectively', 'from... to...') helps the reader follow the data easily. Minor improvements could be made by ensuring that the overview clearly highlights the most significant trends (e.g., the largest increase in microwave ownership) and by using a wider range of linking words to enhance flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'owned', 'ownership rates', 'accounted for'). However, there is some repetition of phrases like 'ownership rates' and 'electronic appliance', and the range could be more varied. Using more precise and varied terms (e.g., 'prevalence', 'adoption', 'household penetration') would enhance the lexical resource. Additionally, ensure correct word forms (e.g., 'household ownership' instead of 'households ownership'). Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including comparative forms and complex sentences. However, there are a few errors that affect accuracy: 'households ownership' should be 'household ownership', 'holds' should be 'held' (subject-verb agreement in past tense), and 'Microwave experienced' should be 'The microwave experienced' (article missing). Punctuation is generally correct. To improve, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, articles, and noun forms.

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