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Band 5+: The bar chart shows information on the number of applications into 4 different faculties in 1990, 2023 and projections for 2030.

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The image shows student applications to 3 US universities in four faculty areas; in Biology: blue-university 1 has 3000, red-university 2 has 1500, green-university 3 has 1000; in Engineering: blue 4000, red 3000, green 1500; in Business: blue 1500, red 3000, green 4000; in Social Work: blue 1000, red 2022, green 2030.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of students applied for 4 different faculty which includes Biology, Engineering, Business and Social work. The data includes the year 1990, 2022 and projelcts the estimated application of year 2030.

Overall, the tragery of Biology and engineering is declining over the period of time where as the trend shows and increasing demand for social work and business. Engineering was at it peak in year 1990 while the year 2030 predicts business at top.

The number of applicants in year 1990 for biology was 3000. In contrast, Social work had only 1000. As the time passes the number got lower for Biology and become 1500 in the year 2020. While Social work number climes to approximately 1300. The prediction of 2030 shows less demand of Biology around 900 meanwhile the number increases for Social work about 2000.

Engineering and business shows and opposite trends. Engineering is at its pike in 1990 at 4000 in comparison to Business which is at its lowest only at 2000. In 2020 the number falls for engineering to 2500 but it climbes for Business to 3000. The year 2030 forcast an drastic drope for engineering at 600 whereas business demand sky rockets at 4000

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 7

number: 6

engineering: 6

biology: 5

social: 5

shows: 3

demand: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and key data points presented in the bar chart. The overall trends are identified, and specific data is included to support the observations. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., the years mentioned are not always consistent with the provided information). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and directly reflects the information in the chart. Also, consider adding more comparative language to highlight the differences and similarities between the faculties and time periods more effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas is sometimes disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. For example, using more varied cohesive devices would help to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('tragery' instead of 'trajectory,' 'pike' instead of 'peak,' 'climes' instead of 'climbs,' 'drope' instead of 'drop'). Expanding your range of vocabulary and ensuring accuracy would improve the clarity and impact of your writing. Consider using synonyms and more precise terms to describe trends and quantities. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles ('students applied,' 'projelcts,' 'Engineering was at it peak,' 'Social work number climes,' 'and opposite trends,' 'forcast an drastic drope'). These errors significantly affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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