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Band 4+: The bar chart shows the amount of data created on the Internet every minute. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a bar graph titled "Amount of Internet Data Per Minute (Kilobytes)" with the following data points: YouTube 6000 KB, Email 10000 KB, Tiktok 4000 KB, Messenger 7000 KB, LinkedIn 2000 KB, Instagram 8000 KB, Netflix 3000 KB.

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The provided bar chart illustrates the number of data created on the Internet each minute.

Overall,seven internet datas depict different numbers.While the highest is email,the lowest is linkedin.Youtube and tiktok have the same rate.Massenger and instagram also have the same data.Only netflix shows another figure.

To began with high percentage of data,email is reached the highest level amount of other datas(just under 10000).In the second place,massenger and instagram stayed(both surpass 6000).Their results are much lower than email although they are moderate higher than other datas.

In the term of datas that are lower than email,messenger and instagram,youtube and tiktok are used alike per minute.They both are used above 4000 every minute.Even though others are similiar to one another,netflix is quite specific around them.Since it presents that it is used just above 2000 that is unlike others.Despite the fact that netflix was so lower than other datas,linkedinhas its lowest point(half of 2000),opposite the figure of email.

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the data but contains several inaccuracies and unclear comparisons. For example, it incorrectly states that YouTube and TikTok have the same rate, and that Messenger and Instagram have the same data. The language is often unclear and contains grammatical errors. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main features and making clear comparisons. Use precise data descriptions and ensure correct spelling of platform names.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical progression. Ideas are presented in a confusing order, and paragraphing is not effectively managed. Use of cohesive devices is limited and often inaccurate, making the message difficult to follow. Consider structuring the report with a clear overview and then grouping similar data points for comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with frequent misuse of words (e.g., 'datas', 'massenger', 'linkedinhas'). There is little attempt to use a range of appropriate terms for describing data trends. To improve, learn and practice using precise vocabulary for comparisons (e.g., 'significantly higher', 'slightly lower') and avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms, subject-verb agreement issues, and missing articles. Sentence structures are often incomplete or awkward. Focus on mastering basic grammar rules and using a variety of sentence structures accurately. Proofreading carefully can help reduce errors.

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