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Band 5+: The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture, services, and industries in three countries in 1990 and projected distribution in 2030. Summarize by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows bar charts on the distribution of employment among agriculture, industries, and services in three countries for 1990 and projected for 2030. In Country A, 1990 figures were: Agriculture 20%, Industry 30%, Services 45%; for 2030, projections are: Agriculture 10%, Industry 28%, Services 55%. In Country B, 1990 figures were: Agriculture 55%, Industry 20%, Services 25%; the 2030 projections are: Agriculture 45%, Industry 40%, Services 42%. In Country C, 1990 employment was: Agriculture 5%, Industry 40%, Services 70%; the 2030 projections are: Agriculture 4%, Industry 30%, Services 90%.

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The bar chart below introduces the employment distribution in countries A, B and C in three spheres: agriculture, industry and services. The scheme reflects the situation in 1990 and 2030.

Overall, the share of people involved in services went up in all the states in 2030. The biggest increase can be noticed in country B as the indicator was nearly 20 per cent in 1990 and hit 40 per cent in 2030.

Industry sphere witnessed descrease in states A and C as in both countries this factor became lower in 2030 in comparison with 1990. At the same time, there is a leap in employment distribution in industry in state B because the indicator significantly went up in 2030.

Concerning agriculture, it could be evidenced that country A and B underwent the decline in this sphere while this mark in state C remained steadily. The harshest decrease saw in country A with loosing ten per cent in the share of employment.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by presenting an overview and key trends. It correctly identifies the overall rise in services and the decline in agriculture in some countries. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the service sector increase in Country B is overstated (from 25% to 42%, not 20% to 40%), and the report fails to mention the significant rise in industry in Country B and the projected increase in services in Country C. Additionally, the statement that agriculture in Country C remained steady is inaccurate, as it is projected to decline slightly. To improve, ensure all main features are covered accurately and avoid minor data misrepresentations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each sector. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'this factor', 'this mark'). The overview could be more comprehensive, and the final paragraph lacks a clear concluding sentence. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that pronouns and demonstratives clearly refer to the intended nouns. Also, consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'went up', 'witnessed decrease', 'leap', 'decline', 'remained steadily'), which is appropriate for the task. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward choices (e.g., 'descrease' is a misspelling, 'harshest decrease' is not idiomatic, 'loosing' should be 'losing', and 'sphere' is used repeatedly). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'experienced a decline', 'remained stable', 'a significant increase', and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report attempts to use a variety of sentence structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('the indicator was nearly 20 per cent' should be 'the indicator was nearly 20 per cent' but later 'the indicator significantly went up' is fine, but 'witnessed descrease' is a misspelling and 'loosing' is incorrect), and awkward phrasing like 'it could be evidenced that' which is not natural. To improve, focus on using correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and more natural sentence constructions. Proofreading for spelling and punctuation is also essential.

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