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The image shows "Average protein intake" in a bar graph for four regions: India, East Africa, Latin America, and North America. India: 15 (Other protein), 13 (Animal protein), total 28; East Africa: 16 (Other protein), 16 (Animal protein), total 32; Latin America: 13 (Other protein), 32 (Animal protein), total 45; North America: 18 (Other protein), 62 (Animal protein), total 80.

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The bar graph demonstrates the protein intakes of people in different part of the world.

overall,it is clear that,the highest protein was used in North America in contrast,the least percentage of protien was consumed in india.

Initially,there was the highest percentage of protien consumed by people in North america,at about 18 from other protien sources and to approximately 62 by animal then,the second highest protien used in latin America,32 percent protien received from animal however,just 13 percent protien received other protien source.

By contrast,in both counties,africa and india were consumed the least percentage of protien,they consumed at about 15 percent protien from other protien source while east africa received 16 percent protien from animal and 13 percent protien consumed in india.

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The report identifies some main features but includes inaccuracies and lacks detail. The organization is present but could be improved with clearer paragraphing and transitions. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, providing more specific details, and ensuring a clearer structure. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of information is not always logical. The 'overall' statement is a good start, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear transitions and connections between ideas. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information more effectively. For example, the comparison between Africa and India could be more clearly linked. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly', 'in contrast', 'furthermore') to improve the connections between sentences and paragraphs.

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The vocabulary is basic and repetitive. There is a reliance on phrases like 'percentage of protein' and 'consumed in'. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data. For example, instead of 'percentage of protein', consider using 'protein intake' or 'protein consumption'. Use synonyms and varied sentence structures to enhance the richness of the language. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('was used' instead of 'was consumed'), subject-verb agreement issues ('protien received'), and incorrect preposition usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve, focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using simpler sentence structures to ensure accuracy.

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