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Band 5+: The chart below shows information about heart attacks by age and gender in USA.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts heart attacks per year in the USA, segmented by age group and gender, measured in thousands. In the 29-44 age group, men experienced 123,000 heart attacks and women 3,000. In the 45-64 age group, men experienced 424,000 heart attacks compared to 136,000 for women. The 65+ age group saw 440,000 heart attacks in men and 374,000 in women.

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The chart illustrates the number of heart attacks by three age groups: 29-44,45-64,65+ between men and women in USA per year.

Overall,it can be seen that men have larger number of heart attacks than women in average,similarly women are less harmed by heart attacks in all three age groups.

Younger group of men are been attacked by heart problems rapidly more than women,with the rate of 123 thousands,meanwhile women have only 3 heart attacks per year.

Similarly, second group of women have a very small amount of victims compared to menthat have significant number of people(424 thousands), while only 136 thousand women deals with heart attacks.

Oldest group of people from 65 and older,get approximately the same rate of heart-attacked people,with the rate of 440 thousand victims of men and just over 374 thousand of women

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