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Band 5+: The chart below shows Japan's poulation by age groups starting in 1960 and inclusing a forecast to 2040.

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The image presents a line chart illustrating Japan's population percentages by age group from 1960 to 2040. For the 0-14 age group, the percentages recorded are: 1960, 30%; 1970, 24%; 1980, 23%; 1990, 18%; 2000, 14%; 2010, 13%; 2020, 11%; 2030, 11%; and 2040, 9%. The 25-64 age group's data is: 1960, 65%; 1970, 70%; 1980, 68%; 1990, 70%; 2000, 69%; 2010, 63%; 2020, 59%; 2030, 54%; and 2040, 56%. The 65+ age group's percentages are: 1960, 5%; 1970, 6%; 1980, 9%; 1990, 12%; 2000, 17%; 2010, 24%; 2020, 30%; 2030, 30%; and 2040, 35%.

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The line graph compares the popularity of Japan by age groups from 1960 to 2040. Overall, the proportion of people aged 0-14 are sharply decreased, the people aged 65+ are increased and aged 25-64 did not change significantly.

Additionally, aged 65+ people group started increasing with 0% to half the 40% from over the period, over the 1980 and 1990 they did not changed significantly. Starting with noticeable changes group of 0-14 remained relatively stable from 1960 to 1990 but after the period it increased steadily from 30% to 10% over the period. The group of 25-64 remained almost unchanged over the period. It started with the half the 70% and it ended with near the 60%.

Turning to more consistent ages , 25-64 ages showed little changes over the period. The 65+ years old people group showed large increase than the 0-14 years old people group. The figure then experienced a mild fluctuation over the period, but remained broadly unchanged at the same level by the end of the period.

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period: 7

people: 5

group: 5

25-64: 3

remained: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the trends for the three age groups, but it contains some inaccuracies and unclear phrasing. For example, it states that the 65+ group started at 0%, which is incorrect. The description of the 0-14 group as increasing after 1990 is also inaccurate. The report would benefit from more precise data references and clearer language. Focus on accurately summarizing the main trends and supporting them with specific data points from the chart.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present an overview and specific details, but the flow is disrupted by unclear references and awkward phrasing. The paragraphing could be improved to separate the overview from detailed analysis. Use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and sometimes inappropriate (e.g., 'popularity of Japan'). There is repetition of basic phrases like 'over the period'. To improve, use a wider range of precise terms (e.g., 'decline', 'increase', 'fluctuate', 'plateau') and avoid informal or vague language. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement ('are sharply decreased'), incorrect verb forms ('did not changed'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often simple or fragmented. Work on using a variety of complex sentences accurately and proofread for basic errors.

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