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Band 4+: The chart below shows the donations given to six different types of charity by one company from 2012 to 2014. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Donations by one company, 2012-2014', with the y-axis representing thousands of dollars. For Social Welfare, donations were approximately $23k in 2012, $18k in 2013, and $24.5k in 2014. For Education, the amounts were $8.5k in 2012, $8k in 2013, and $8.5k in 2014. Donations to Environment were $8.5k in 2012, $8k in 2013, and $7k in 2014. For Health, donations were $6k in 2012, $7.5k in 2013, and $9.5k in 2014. For Wildlife, the values were $3k in 2012, $4k in 2013, and $5k in 2014. Lastly, for Arts, the donations were $2.5k in 2012, $2.5k in 2013, and $4k in 2014.

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The given bar chart demostrates the contribute that invest in six types of charity ( social welfare, education, Environment, Health, wildlife, and arts ) through company in every 2 year from 2012 to 2014.

Overall, it can be seen that company contribute more amount of dollar in social welfare rather then other charity in every year. In contrast arts shows lower figure in chart which means business invest less cash every year.

The social welfare got highest donation in every 2 years from 2012 business shares around 23 dollar and in 2013 they gives upto 13 dollar and in 2014 they provide more or less 24 dollars. However, In 2014 company invest more dollars in social welfare as compared to 2013 and 2012 . To education cooperators assistence 7dollars in 2012 although they relief least dollar (6dollar) in 2013 as compare to 2014 which has fund about 7dollar

The environment also follwed the same figure as education which consist exactly 5 dollar in 2013 and nearby 5.5 to 6.5 dollars in 2014. In the health sector organization give fund in a secquence wise in every year like around 5.5 to 6 dollars in 2012 and below 7 dollar in 2013 and near 8 dollar in 2014 . In 2012, 3 or 3.3 dollars is provided and above 1,2 dollars had given in 2013 and at the last year (2014) approximately 5 dollars is constructed in wildlife community . At the arts in every 2 years company donate less than 5 dollars in every year.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the donations for each charity over the three years, and it includes an overview. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Social Welfare figures, Education figures, Environment figures, Health figures, Wildlife figures, and Arts figures are all misreported). The report also contains some irrelevant or unclear statements (e.g., 'in every 2 year' and 'constructed in wildlife community'). The structure is somewhat disorganized, and the language is often imprecise. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data, using clear and concise language, and ensuring that comparisons are made where appropriate. Also, avoid vague phrases and ensure that the overview is clear and supported by the data.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overview, but the organization is unclear and the flow is often disrupted. The overview is somewhat vague and does not effectively summarize the main trends. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and logical progression, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparisons. Cohesive devices are used sparingly and sometimes inaccurately. To improve, use clear paragraphing with distinct sections for each charity or group of charities, and employ a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'demostrates', 'contribute', 'assistence', 'follwed', 'secquence'). There is an attempt to use synonyms, but the range is narrow and often inaccurate. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and data (e.g., 'donations', 'funding', 'peaked', 'fluctuated', 'remained stable'), and ensure word choices are precise and natural. Avoid informal or incorrect terms and focus on using appropriate academic language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that significantly impede understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, articles, prepositions, and sentence structure. For example, 'demostrates the contribute that invest' is unclear, and 'in every 2 year' is incorrect. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures. Review basic grammar rules, especially for describing data (e.g., 'donations were approximately $23k'), and proofread your work to eliminate errors.

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